Let's try some poetry!

Haven't written a poem in so long! Let's see if I still got it.

You're so pretty
Your amber eyes stick to me like honey
I can't get over your fuzzy laugh
Your smile turns the gray sky sunny
Your stare can cut any man in half
If I could give you just one thing
I'd want to give you my name
I'll take away all the troubles you bring
And turn them into a game
The sound you make when you breathe
Is the song that I dance to the best
You could be everything that I need
With you I'm always impressed
Let me be the one that's always right
Let me be the one to say good night

Well no doubt that took longer than usual. But again, I'm rusty. Let me know what you think. Constructive criticism is welcomed.